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Nonetheless I Miss You
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Nonetheless I Miss You |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Nonetheless I Miss You I miss hearing your voice I miss listening to your new adventures, and of people and places you have yet to explain… I miss looking into your eyes And holding you… I miss all the time now past, we’ve not been, two... I missed it all, you and me, the way it could have been… If I had not missed reality: you really were for me… I miss that time, although it was too short to deem it could possibly be true. The fact, that it was a perfect time for me and you… If I had only listened when you said: “I miss you, come back home with me.” That was thirty-four years ago today. Nonetheless I miss you… _________________________________ |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Learn to learn Nothing offered is cheap No-one learns to just take the time Consumer's all Your words are worth thinking about Dave |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hi JL, good to see you posting...sad but true, all to oft, we pass by people and things that were so valuable, but at the time, we didn't recognize they were so.... Beautiful message Lee J. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hindsight... But you did what you felt you needed to do then... and in some way, I'm sure the other could understand. This happens so very often.  And to so many. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JL~ Thirty four years is a long, long time to stay the memories in your rhyme ... A time worth remembering is always worth remembering~ You pour such poignant ink~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Enjoyed the read, JL, and how often we look back and say, "If only". I decided a long time ago not to be in that same position again - the "now" counts so very much. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thanks all! I just ran across an old picture of the girl this is written about, it brought back the memories, and the words just popped out. JL  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
We all make mistakes...sometimes I think I make more than my share...James |
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