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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-06-05 07:59 PM


The One I Wanted

No, thats not the Suzy
that I wanted.

Are you crazy or something?

Have you no heart?

That kind of Suzy
is tearing me apart.

Yes, I loved and appreciated
all those precious moments
she gave to me,

but I never wanted
a Suzy that
I wanted,

I wanted a Suzy
that wanted me.

One Thought

"Once I was with a woman
that I didn't belong with.
My guess, she finally grew
tired of me and left."

JamesLee
May17
2006

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-06-05 08:08 PM


well then
stop looking
let her find you

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-06-06 10:18 AM


we always seem to want what we can't have, and if we stop looking, it seems to come to us...

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2006-06-06 03:12 PM


Formula 1

Always engineered

But never understood

Just changed

As Motor Racing does

dave

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
4 posted 2006-06-06 03:52 PM


Jackson Browne says..
"you take Sally
I'll take Sue
ain't no difference
between the two..."

There's a Suzy for you, James. I enjoyed this.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2006-06-07 07:29 PM


Thank you for the nice responses...actually we found each other...some are just learning experiences and we want more...James
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