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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2006-06-05 03:34 AM





horizontal thoughts

seek upward mobility

wings are optional


darting dragonflies

hover to maintain vast swamps

munching those that bite


mosquito eater

symbiotically keeps peace

sets parameters


[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (06-06-2006 10:28 AM).]

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1 posted 2006-06-05 06:52 AM


very clever!
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2 posted 2006-06-05 09:20 AM


Always glad to hear your thoughts, Kacy, you've a unique look at life.  Hugs, Ken

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The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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3 posted 2006-06-05 01:44 PM


Ah  Well done !
I love this !
especially...

"horizontal thoughts

seek upward mobility

wings are optional"

So much said here.

::smiles::   I'll take Vertical Vision anytime.
Those Horizontal thoughts...are just one durn thing after another.  LOL


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4 posted 2006-06-05 01:50 PM


Absolutely fantastic (I saw it all!)

Waste not a second ~ Carpe' Diem

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5 posted 2006-06-05 04:19 PM


Great expression within a defined structure. The first one is especially impressive.

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6 posted 2006-06-05 04:21 PM


You write like a devil on speed Midnite

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7 posted 2006-06-06 10:11 AM


Very clever indeed!  I love how you experiment with thought and form.  I always find food for thought at your thread. This will be buggin' me all day.  I'll have to save this for a later read after it incubates for a while...

misce

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8 posted 2006-06-06 12:18 PM


I opt for the gossamer beauty of wings.  Dragonflies indeed!  Red and turquoise tremulous with humming.  I think summer is coming!  Lovely write, Midnitesun.  
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9 posted 2006-06-06 03:27 PM




"horizontal thoughts

seek upward mobility

wings are optional"

I have no words to tell you how much I like this. How about ... damn fine work?


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10 posted 2006-06-06 03:31 PM


each reply is like a caress
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11 posted 2006-06-06 08:23 PM



Beautifully clever series of senryus as one poem - you've proven your talent yet again by being so versatile.  I really love this and am saving it

Melissa~

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