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Don_Juan
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Far from where I am going

0 posted 2006-07-13 10:16 PM


Floating
I am here
drifting on the moonlit clouds
passing past thoughts and future inspired songs
let me serenade you, my Lunar peace stream advocate
wrap me in your solacing strong pale gaze
and i will fall quickly, accepting
your calm tide into
my soul.

nice use of muffin



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LeeJ
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2 posted 2006-07-14 09:30 AM


if she doesn't, I will

how could she say no?

Happy Friday

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3 posted 2006-07-20 10:49 PM


yeah man like the way this write take the person into another place , good stuff

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

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