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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-06-04 01:40 PM



Pen
A dot
A blur in a pattern dancing a knot in a fence
That fenched
To such subtle beginnings on old tools when a trim ankle may have
Had a chain
And not an opportunity in a hotel

Sketched in mind sketched indeed
Sketched etched in downward stairs that climb upwards to pockets
Of

Image
A touch
A dot that in a pattern drew others dots into an image
That darted
To harsh outlines on old ideas when the old was new and still is that quality
On a ball
And just another cell

Sketched in mind sketched indeed
Sketched etched in downward stairs that climb upwards to pockets
Of


© Copyright 2006 Dave Page - Cirencester UK - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-06-04 05:32 PM


reality
sketched in charcoal or graphite
not pastels

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2006-06-04 05:48 PM


Dont ask me why I wanted to write something on slavery or slivery or saliva

Dave

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Gaia
3 posted 2006-06-04 05:52 PM


perhaps you are feeling
like a work slave already
to your new position

Bodger
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4 posted 2006-06-04 05:54 PM


I always try to ensure that any new position is with consent

Dave

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Gaia
5 posted 2006-06-04 06:04 PM


smart survival skills
again, enjoy

Bodger
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6 posted 2006-06-04 06:08 PM


Midnight

How else

Dave

froggy
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7 posted 2006-06-04 08:44 PM


Enjoyed the read my friend. The words discribe many things.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

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