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themute
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0 posted 2006-06-04 01:27 PM



I don’t know how anyone can be more beautiful
Than the girl that I love
Because I see her completely as who she is
All other women are not as complete
There hair not as perfect there clothes not as neat
I am entangled in her beauty all day
And in such a beauty I believe I will stay
No matter her sentiments for my words or me
I will love her so tenderly
The reason her beauty has tangled me so
For her complex nature and charm she has none
But a magnetism so strong
To me it is a constant pulling inward
And this pulling gets me further entwined
For it is her love I wish to feel
Deep inside the forest of needles and vines
They will cut me and scar me but never detour
For my love is so pure
No pain such circumstance can give
Will draw me back lest I would cease to live
My goal is to find her love
For she has found mine a much lesser task
For her it was my sight that found her and basked
She was too you
Too something I’d never seen
Too sad to see you, your love with him
But too for me this day
Is so bothersome indeed unrest
Is what I get for loving one who’s too possessed



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Gaia
1 posted 2006-06-04 05:35 PM


masterfully written
oh my, a keeper for sure
so many good lines

themute
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2 posted 2006-06-05 07:50 PM


cool


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