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linkin16
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since 2006-05-29
Posts 26
Wales,UK

0 posted 2006-06-04 12:23 PM



guess who's back here again
picking myself off the floor..
writing in cliches
think i've been here before..

they say we learn from mistakes
grow strong from our tears..
but im falling again
those crys fell on deaf ears..

now i stand here alone
trying to hold my head high..
while you walk off with a smile
without as much as a goodbye..

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Debo
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since 2006-04-18
Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.
1 posted 2006-06-04 06:21 PM


This is very nice all though it was so sad it had beautiful flow. I really like it

Debo

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2006-06-04 07:41 PM


ouch
The Shadow in Blue
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since 2006-05-18
Posts 493
EL, Michigan
3 posted 2006-06-04 07:51 PM


I enjoyed this poem and how you described the univeral feeling of sorrow after a negative action happens in anybody's life.
Oh and the flow was great too..
:[

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
4 posted 2006-06-05 03:04 AM


Ouch yes ...I know that kind of hurt , I know someone that  has been silent for months and never said goodbye

Hope

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
5 posted 2006-06-05 01:35 PM


Sneaker waves...mini tsunamis of the heart.


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