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Night Breath Stolen
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Night Breath Stolen |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Night descends and rain I hear darkness speak softly of rhythm and currents Breath shallows, essence hallowed among quiet lisping and seeping shadows, float feathers, laughter reminisced Stolen from wind, unfurled white sails, and midnight oceans' dancing incalescent moon tides |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Klassy Lassy I've felt that. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
yes...  Glad to share with you this morning, Sy. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely writing...thank you M |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
now, I'm smiling, too! You are welcome!  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A very nice picture your words have given us to savor. Well done. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
My pleasure, Magnus. I am just happy to feel my fingers move on the keyboard again! But the magic of the wee hours is a good catalyst when sleep eludes me.  Klassy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I loved this...very well done! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Thank you, Dixie. Good morning! The soft thrumming of the rain can be very nice, sometimes entrancing, yes? |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Klassy You can rub my fears away, having of course, first put them there Nice words Dave |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Lovely and the title is wonderful. |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
Beautifully refreshing! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Bodger, that would be a first for me. I never scared anybody in my life! ~ klassy |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Lady, thank you, I like those rainy lullabies. The title just stood out from the poem. Thank you for the sweet comments. hugs, Klassy |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Lady, thank you, I like those rainy lullabies. The title just stood out from the poem. Thank you for the sweet comments. hugs, Klassy |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Marcel,  Be blessed![This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (06-06-2006 12:26 PM).] |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
You've basically done a multi-dimensional and waited to see if anyone knew For readers take the first set of words from each line, then the second then as you move down, you note one has a fourth line and reading it on the fourth pass, you have the end of the poem dave |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Added by me I was working from memory Forget the fourth in my words I was too swift And so the fifth Dave |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Such a pleasure to read!! |
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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
"softly of rhythm and currents Breath" My, this IS poetry! Will |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
To me this poem captures the state between awake and asleep. Very imaginative. PLEASE VISIT MY REGULARLY UPDATED WEB SITE http://www.anthonyarmstrong.zoomshare.com |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I hear darkness speak" ~ and so do your words, Ms Klassy! I love the night! But I also love the morning so my sleeptime is often compromised!  Loves 'n hugs, Linda  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Bodger, I just wrote. I didn't think about it until I added the title afterward. You know how some writes just seem to be given. This was like that. Thank you for taking the time for me. ~ Klassy |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Martie, Sweet One, thank you.  love, K. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Will Rhyme, on occasion my muse surprises me. Thank you. Shirtless, you are very adept in your assumption. I got up to write it down. LOL A professor once told me to stay awake for three or four days, that I'd be amazed at the creativity my brain would produce. I just got a migraine  --thought disconnected big time. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I love morning, too, Earth Angel. In the summertime, nights are so magical. Much of the year, though, the weather is cool here and rain is frequent. It's like a mantra in the dark, soothing and mesmerizing. Enjoy your starry nights. love you, K. |
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