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Magnus
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0 posted 2006-06-03 03:23 PM


If again we met upon the field of battle, swords
bristling above a knight’s shield.  Where
rooks stand poised to castle and bishops
slide in devilish diagonal moves.

If again the queen might raise a lovely
head, pause lingeringly and look longingly
into my eyes...she might see the king’s
weakness...For his soul steps methodically
as would a pawn, a mere pawn....standing
apart from the dance.

If again the joust might begin, I would bow
graciously to thee, for thee art the skies
above me, the winds that chase me, the
heavens that await me as you whisper
softly in my ear....”Checkmate”....

And the victor shares the spoils of war
as two dance into the night, awaiting
the strike of twelve and the grasp of dawn’s
warming glow....a glow matching our
own.


[This message has been edited by Magnus (06-03-2006 09:18 PM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2006-06-03 03:40 PM


Barry,
Very romantic, I think the apple is still stuck in your throat. LOL

Klassy Lassy
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2 posted 2006-06-03 05:28 PM


mmmmmm....I am still waiting to learn how to dance and to play chess.  Being checkmated in the manner you describe seems very appealing.  Somehow, I can't seem to get out of the laundry room and the kitchen long enough to learn the strategies of knight to a queen.  But sometimes, I see the sweetest of Kings.

I love the intrigue.  ~ Klassy


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3 posted 2006-06-03 05:38 PM


Grin...
Nice write.
TD

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4 posted 2006-06-03 08:58 PM


You have bishops that slide side to side?

I'm gonna checkmate you in 5 or 6 moves.

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5 posted 2006-06-03 09:13 PM


Kacy, perhaps "diagonally" might be the
more appropriate choice of words...

How many moves?  hmmmmmmm

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6 posted 2006-06-03 09:26 PM


LOL. Yes, the bishop is restricted to diagonal moves. under 10
The first time I played strip chess? I quickly learned you never leave your knight stuck in the corner.
never mind...

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7 posted 2006-06-04 04:20 PM




Whichever devilish way your bishops slide, they get the job done. Captivating work.

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