I'll take a lime with my Corona please...

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Liz Sinclair
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since 2006-05-06

Posts 93
Atlantis

0 posted 2006-06-03 12:11 PM

I’ll take a lime with my Corona please

The alcove nestles itself between the mountains
and the ocean, just like the soft crevice between your
mother’s breasts, that comforted you as a child.
Sounds of current soar aloft, and orchestrate
the azure sky into a aria of soft tones.

The small path leading down past the palm trees,
invites the senses, as the plush foliage is replaced
with the softness of granular downy.
It’s like walking on velvet skies,
and you can still see the imprint of footfall
of an earlier escapade upon the white sand,
before the crescendo of turquoise waves
washes over them, leaving the
shoreline immaculate and alluring;
as if the beach itself is a waning virgin,
enjoying her first taste of passion.

The tart sweetness of lime,
tickles your hungry lips as it’s
plucked from a newly opened bottle of Corona.

Eyes shut, relaxation commences...

“You’ve got a call on line one.”

“Hello, are you there?”

I then realize it’s not a good idea to stare at
The World’s Best Beaches calendar
while at work.

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

1 posted 2006-06-03 07:35 AM

Calendar talk. clever and fun. martyjo,

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2006-06-03 09:46 AM

this is great

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2006-06-03 12:39 PM

Those daydreams will bite you
every time.

Enjoyed!

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2006-06-03 12:43 PM

Corona's commercial is one of my favorites, and this sure brought that right to life again in my mind. Ole'

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2006-06-03 02:29 PM

Liz~
THIS line of thought is creatively brilliant~

'the beach itself is a waning virgin,
enjoying her first taste of passion.'

Oh yes~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

kif kif
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since 2006-06-01

Posts 439
BCN

6 posted 2006-06-03 03:01 PM

heeheehee! Ah, the power of your words took me right into your scene. Hey! Are you not supposed to be working? Oh, I see, you're working on dream-time!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2006-06-03 03:04 PM

Good point and a great read....I thought I
was there...

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2006-06-03 04:32 PM

Oh Liz! You are incredible. There
I was, in that alcove listening to
the crescendo of turquoise waves when
WHAM!

Well I don’t have to tell YOU
what happened. Ingenious work!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

9 posted 2006-06-03 09:47 PM

Oh, what a gorgeous, absolutely cool write!
Nice imagery Liz. Hmmmm

icebox
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in the shadows

10 posted 2006-06-04 04:44 PM

Very clever.

Was i written at work?

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