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latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida

0 posted 2006-06-02 11:40 PM


wrote this fast and rather quick

But I pray my point is what will stick!

I am tired of the talk of death

I wish not to hear of your last breath

For I do not want any of your loot

To me the point is rather mute

You are what your family cherish

Not the thought that you might perrish

As I think back throught the years

All your hugs, praise and cheers

I think of all the fun we've had

All the pain that made you sad

Bedtime stories, long walks at dark

Birds sweet songs in the park

Dressing up like a clown

Keeping me from a spiral down

I love you mom, Here and Now,

I am not looking forward to your final Bow....

NO! For I do not wish any of your loot!

For me the point is rather mute!

I am tired by the talk of death!

I wish not to hear of your last breath!

Love,
Jaclyn

June 2 2006


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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2006-06-03 12:19 PM


That is the way we feel about our Moms, or at least the way we should.  You pegged it!   ...jo
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2006-06-03 07:06 AM


thanks for sharing this Marty
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