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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2006-06-02 10:41 PM

The stillness of midnight quiets my mind
in slumberous surround sound.
Dreams capture my thoughts,
or is it the other way around?
Sleep comes in bits and pieces,
a few short minutes at a time.
Morning sun gently wakens me,
sometimes finding my meandering mind
caught within a golden rhyme.
The words have never been mine.
I’ve simply borrowed them
from some generous muse
passing by in a night flight,
who saw fit to lay them at my feet,
as if she were some poetic golden goose.
I’ve never struggled to find a word,
and sometimes, the music follows,
like horses galloping in a closeknit herd,
or colors banding together into a rainbow
after a caressing heavenly shower.
The stillness of midnight
quiets this mind and soul,
showers me with celestial music
that falls freely from the clouds
long after twilight embraces the daysky in goodbye,
passionate as a lover’s farewell kiss and sigh.
That's when the dreams capture my thoughts.
Or is it the other way around?

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2006-06-02 11:37 PM

That's when the dreams capture my thoughts.
Or is it the other way around?

somewhere they meet
midstream
with you
as the medium

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2006-06-03 12:22 PM

I think maybe it is the other way around....who knows? Anyhow, Kacy, I enjoyed reading this one! *hugs*...jo

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

3 posted 2006-06-05 09:09 PM

Either way ....

    such dreams or thoughts hold you in the highest of regard

         amongst stars, clouds, and all the other angels

                   I found myself caught in your words!

          cT

sweetberry
Member

since 2006-03-29

Posts 125

4 posted 2006-06-05 09:26 PM

Nice write...very touching! I enjoyed reading this poem.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2006-06-05 10:41 PM

Morning sun gently wakens me,
sometimes finding my meandering mind
caught within a golden rhyme.
The words have never been mine.

~*~

Kacy, I know just how you feel...
sometimes the words
are just there
but I always know
they have been used before...
and I marvel that perhaps
you,
and I...
can fit them
just once
into a different puzzle.

Write on!

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

6 posted 2006-06-07 01:10 AM

beautiful and true writings, do not get much better than this.

Will Rhyme
Member

since 2006-05-22

Posts 149

7 posted 2006-06-07 01:18 AM

"or is it the other way around?"

Good poem, better question.

Will

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