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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2006-06-02 04:18 PM



she could be packing

  what i'm lacking

i wonder if a Big Mac and

            fries

would be delicious enough to disguise

my intentions to get her wise

to my need to surprise

her with rhymes so nutricious for her soul

she'll gladly grab hold

         of my arm

and squeeze it gently enough to let me know there's no harm

          in trusting



                               love,

                               howard


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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2006-06-03 03:20 PM


scrumptous
with a touch of pen

Debo
Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.
2 posted 2006-06-03 11:20 PM


Very light and refreshing
Love it

Debo

Devious Intellectual
Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112

3 posted 2006-06-03 11:41 PM


very different style but i like it.. thanks for the post..
playing.with.crayons
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since 2006-01-02
Posts 362
Neverland
4 posted 2006-06-04 03:10 AM


and sometime's trust is the hardest thing in the world to gain, and the easiest to lose.
easier than the 5kg you gain during christmas anyhow.
much enjoyed, cheye

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