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Open Poetry #38

His Name was Colors

shades of paul
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since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

0 posted 2006-06-02 11:53 AM

When sad he was Blue,
but very well Red.
A complexion of Tan,
just don't call him Yellow.
With hair an old Gray,
always had lots of Green.
Front tooth of Gold,
while the rest were pearl White.
I so board with this poem,
I will paint it Black.
paul

p.s. Obviously not Shakespere but after a long break, I need to get my Karma back, Sorry. Poems can only get better
(I hope)

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2006-06-02 12:00 PM

shades of paul,
Hey you have a fine poem there, work on it.

shades of paul
Member

since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

2 posted 2006-06-02 12:08 PM

Thanks for the encoragement Seymour.
I will think it over. I started with what I thought were some good ideas, then nothing came to me.

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

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