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Ella Blue
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0 posted 2006-06-01 09:38 PM


who amt I?...WHO AM I?
I'm the reminder that your little girl (long since disowned by you) once had a smile so beautific at the site of a lady bug's spots, it is still unequaled in the annals of little girl smiles.

ME? Who am I?
I tell you this (as we sit in divorce court and watch them hiss-spit and fight for things they care nothing about) I was at the wedding,
and their love was more pure then this hate could ever be.

What am I DOING HERE?
I'm here to show you our moments of beauty,
of untrumpeted good,
and glory gone unremarked upon...
that we are not always one sided, but made up of moments, multi-layered and astounding.

I'm here because I would be lost without you all to remind me
to keep shooting...
your souls.

I am a photographer

[This message has been edited by Ella Blue (06-03-2006 12:40 AM).]

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The Lady
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The Southwest
1 posted 2006-06-03 12:03 PM




"I'm here to show you our moments of beauty, of untrumpeted good, glory gone unremarked upon...that we are not always one sided, but made up of moments,multi-layered and astounding"

Amazing work Ella. Do it some more.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-06-03 09:45 AM


wow! I do love this series...is there more to come?
Ella Blue
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3 posted 2006-06-03 10:01 PM


hmmmm...more? veeee shall zeeee my little chickadeeee...
Seriously I don't partake in drugs...the heat has just addled my brain today.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2006-06-03 11:23 PM


It's a wonderful collage you offered the reader/viewer, the juxtaposition of hissing and smiling imagery, re-framing the good memories that get buried underneath layers of spit.

Nice snapshot!

Devious Intellectual
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since 2006-05-08
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5 posted 2006-06-03 11:36 PM


i liked this cuz its soo true...never rreally thought of it like this eitehr...kinda makes me think different now bout certain things haha..nice read loved it
playing.with.crayons
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Neverland
6 posted 2006-06-04 03:06 AM


"I was at the wedding,
and their love was more pure then this hate could ever be."

wouldn't it be wonderful? to stay like that forrrrrever.
or, you know. not.
on another note.... heat? I can't feel my fingers where I am.

farewell the ash-tray girl

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