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Tom Zart
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0 posted 2006-06-01 09:24 PM



ALL POETS SERVE A MASTER
Most poets have a bit of Solomon
Shakespeare and Poe within.
Constantly eager to share their visions
Of love, life, joy and sin.

Some guzzle whiskey
Some sip wine,
Some prefer cola
And feel just fine.

Some smoke pot
Or suck cigarettes,
Some abuse drugs
With lifetime regrets.

Some attend church
And sing of God,
While others make fun
And call them odd.

All have a purpose,
Which drives them to compose.
All serve a master,
Who by free will, they chose.


By Tom Zart
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Will Rhyme
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1 posted 2006-06-02 02:46 AM


o' skies that knit their heartstrings right,
  To fields that bred them brave,
The saviours come not home to-night:
  Themselves they could not save.

Liz Sinclair
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2 posted 2006-06-03 12:06 PM


...and I think the key phrase is "free will."  Thanks for sharing.  Take care, Liz...Carpe Diem



When I'm good, I'm very good. But when I'm bad, I'm better.
Those who are easily shocked should be shocked more often.
...the immortal Mae West

Tom Zart
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3 posted 2006-06-03 02:52 PM


Thank you for your time taken and kind reply.
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4 posted 2006-06-03 06:30 PM


And some, in the space of one lifetime,
attempt to do all of the above.
Those are the ones I most enjoy reading.
I always cringed hearing that old Sinatra song
"I did it my way"  but adopt that very philosophy.

BTW, welcome to the Pipster forums.

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5 posted 2006-06-03 09:41 PM


You have made an interesting observation
and statement...I agree, yet at the same
time,  I sorta disagree...and I like your
choices of poets...

Robert Edward Levin
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6 posted 2006-06-05 06:25 AM


nicely done.  good flow.

Robert Edward Levin
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7 posted 2006-06-05 06:47 AM


I don't have a bit of any famous poet in me but I do smoke the cigs...guilty as charged
luminosity
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8 posted 2006-06-05 02:11 PM


I do agree, I have given my pen to my master, and hope one day to kneel and have Him say, 'well done my good and faithful servant'
*smile*

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9 posted 2006-06-06 12:47 PM


I just like to play around with words....do little experiments, see what they make. I've never set out to create something grand, nor even to expound some great idea. I notice something about the way life works, and then I tinker with words and shapes and balances, to help someone else notice it too.

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XOx Uriah xOX
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10 posted 2006-06-06 01:53 AM


I'm just slipping into insanity and surprised that no one has told me to shut the hell up.

Even though I know I'm hearing it from somewhere....      ::shrugs::

Troy
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11 posted 2006-06-06 03:55 AM


Sometimes you need a little poison to unimpede the flow of inspiration or a few funky ideas to get the big ones rolling.

It would be interesting to know what's at the root of so many thoughts and ideas that invest civilation and would we still respect them if we did. So the obvious conclusion is, it's better not to know or we may actually be in for a major 'Decline of the West'.

Also sprach Spengler!

Suetang
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12 posted 2006-06-06 04:40 AM


I really enjoyed this piece of writing and I think we can all relate in some way.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Tom Zart
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13 posted 2006-06-06 06:00 AM


I want to thank everyone for your reply and time taken look me up on Google under Tom Zart.
Klassy Lassy
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14 posted 2006-06-06 09:01 PM


I did read this!  Will Rhyme sure hit the nail on the head in response to this one.

I enjoyed reading it, too.  

One of my favorite old poets is Sara Teasdale   Klassy

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15 posted 2006-06-06 10:44 PM


Yes....that's the other half. I like to play with words and patterns....BUT...there are times when there is something like a stream in me with words in it, images and meanings in it, and I did not create them. They are simply there and must be written.

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Will Rhyme
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16 posted 2006-06-07 01:28 AM


All?

Are you certain?

Could there be, at least ONE poet who has never subscribed to your philosophy?

Will

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