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Debo
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since 2006-04-18
Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

0 posted 2006-06-01 07:09 PM


When I think about
The way things use to be
Between you and me
I regret everything.

I wish that we were still friends
I wish that it hadn't turned out like this
But then I'm reminded of how you
Let the people around you
Make up your mind for you.

Did you believe that I deserved
What they did to me
I thought you knew me?

I guess the friend I knew
Was only playing make believe.
Wanting to be someone he could never be.

Debo

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-06-02 06:40 AM


sometimes life delves a cruel twist of things, lessons learned, but begging to differ, regret nothing, and wallow in life's lessons...very well written...


Debo
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since 2006-04-18
Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.
2 posted 2006-06-02 11:19 AM


Well thank you Lee. Yes I did learn alot from this one and I'm much more well rounded for it. You are to kind thanks again

Debo

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