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linkin16
Junior Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 26
Wales,UK

0 posted 2006-06-01 12:47 PM



who have i become..?
who was i before..?
carrying scars from my past
who am i..? im not sure..

i've forgotten how to smile
but i've learnt how to sigh..
i can still hear our sounds of laughter
but now all i wanna do is cry..

used to have so much to say
but the conversation has run dry..
I'd lay and watch you sleep for hours
but now here alone i lie..

tell me..when you see me
what do you see..?
everything you always wanted
someone i can never be..

im sorry..

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-06-01 12:56 PM


sad, but sometimes so so true...



well done

Debo
Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.
2 posted 2006-06-01 11:17 PM


Sad write and yet, never try to be someone your not. Always be you and learn to love who you see...

Debo

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom
3 posted 2006-06-01 11:57 PM


Very recognizable.
You are certainly not alone in this.

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