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WindWalker
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0 posted 2006-06-01 10:22 AM


Her long brown hair moves gently in a gust of wind,
waves caress her feet as she gazes at the horizon,
contemplating: I wonder at her;
cannot reach the place
where she hides her thoughts.

No matter: silhouetted against the sun,
every curve of her tanned body
speaks only of perfection;
every glance, an invitation; every supple movement
makes my body come alive.

Ah! The way she walks,
the gurgle of her laughter, the sultry tones of her voice
between the waves;
the flash of her full smile when I reach for her hand;
the carefree toss of her head!

A friend once asked me,
"What is the most beautiful creation?"
To which I replied:
"I know of nothing more beautiful
than mountains with jagged cliffs
above flowered alpine meadows
on a clear, sunny day..."
He said, “One thing tops it all: a woman in all her glory,
wild, free, happy in her beingness
the true Goddess unchained as a melody;
that is the most beautiful creation
ever brought forth by love.

© Copyright 2006 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-06-01 10:59 AM


WindWalker~
Lovely, lovely this is~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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StevenS
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2 posted 2006-06-01 11:14 AM


Love this WindWalker, mountians..what mountians? :-)
LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-06-01 11:36 AM


this was miraculous...
enjoyed very much

Tom Zart
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4 posted 2006-06-01 09:27 PM


This was a very good write I shall look
for more of your wor thanks for posting.

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Gaia
5 posted 2006-06-01 09:42 PM


tossing her mane,
she captures the wind
runs free into the foam,
white sands flying behind her

grin...something I wrote about a mare,
could be for a human goddess too

enjoyed

CastleGuard
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6 posted 2006-06-15 06:12 PM



I would have written this...if I had thought of the words...

Great job.

Needless to say...I concur.

CG

Jess
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7 posted 2006-06-15 06:39 PM


*sigh* Lovely indeed
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