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                                                                                                                                                                           HEAVEN                                            
------                                                   i wanna go to NEW YORK mabaye get a job and go to work
i wanna eat pickles with my fish and chips lots of salt and vinegar not good for the hips
i wanna get a suntan lying in the sun not look orange with fake tan thats not much fun
i wanna go to heaven in the clouds above the sky
i dont wanna go to old nick down below in a box thats not much fun            

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Best of luck

America will no doubt embrace you

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thanks a lot bodger,hope to go to New Your next March ,cheers for ansewring.

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'bodger that should be York not to good at the computer hope to get better.

[This message has been edited by perfect stranger (06-01-2006 03:52 AM).]

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                heaven

i wanna go to new york
maybe get a job
and go to work
i wanna eat pickles
with fish and chips
lots of salt with vinegar
not good for the hips

i wanna get a suntan
lying in the sun
not look orange
fake tan thats not much fun

i wanna go to heaven
above the sky on cloud nine
i don't wanna go to old nick
down below in a box
now thats not much fun.

________________

i have revised my poem & changed it slightly. my hubby had to show me how to key in ,am new to the pc .
              

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[This message has been edited by perfect stranger (06-01-2006 09:55 AM).]

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PS~

Just doing a little reading and found this~

Well, if New York won't fit the bill ... you and hubby come on down to Florida ... we've got that laying in the sun thing covered~

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Nice...James
 
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