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it's been a while.. |
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linkin16 Junior Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 26Wales,UK |
its been 3 days and 7 months they say that time will heal.. seems like only yesterday and it all just dont seem reaL.. have'nt been inside our room have'nt been outside much.. have'nt stop shivering since the feel of your last touch.. trying to put on a brave face trying to force a smile.. all the while im still crying inside and you've only been gone a while.. your smell still lingers from the last time you were here.. and i can still hear you whispering to me as though you were still near.. im sitting here right now waiting for the sound of the gate.. still as nervous as i was the first time and just like always you're running late.. they say i'll have to move on but i just can't see past you.. because ever since you've been gone there's no one to pull me through.. i miss you.. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully written and felt |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 this is sad and I feel it deeply |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is very sad....and sometimes, it seems like we'll wait forever, but time heals.....it just takes longer than we'd like. Well done. ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Linkin~ This is such a poignant penning~ Take this little :hug: and I pray it helps just a little~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I feel for these words Captured Dave |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is such a heartfelt writing. It touched me. Hugs, Ethel  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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linkin16 Junior Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 26Wales,UK |
coming from the heart,i've never felt so welcomed or appreciated for my writing..especially in other sites ive joined..i already feel part of something here and im touched..im only 23 years of age and age really doesnt have much to do with this but in the last few years that ive matured as a person,i found writing a comfort and release and it really feels like i've found a home for my work..thank you  |
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