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Open Poetry #38

She can see better.

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

0 posted 2006-05-31 04:01 AM

Clutched a walking stick,
tempered around
feeling the ground
in the station compound.

shadows accelerate
while you anticipate
"Hello, Hello?"
Your signal for help.

Is there fear in you?
I can't decipher.
Should i take pity?
Or grant you the dignity?

A shadow paused,
for a good cause.
She stretched her hand,
hoping to give warmth.

your touch feels like mum
delivers calm,
through your palm.

Im glad i held you,
You make my day.
You infected me with warmth and smiles

You shine like the sun,
Though you can't see one.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-05-31 07:26 AM

wonderful
this was sort a suspensefull read & write....

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

2 posted 2006-06-06 11:11 AM

Thank you LeeJ, for your kind words and read.

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