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Rainbowdust
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since 2002-12-05
Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2006-05-30 11:08 PM


Sometimes it all seems pointless.

Not even the brighest spark can catch
when all it is surrounded by
is:

sodden

mindless

apathy.

PS. This doesn't apply to these wonderful blue pages, but rather to the inhabitants of the 'real world' around me.



The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

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Will Rhyme
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since 2006-05-22
Posts 149

1 posted 2006-05-30 11:11 PM


I have felt this very same feeling.

Will

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2006-05-31 12:49 PM


Rainbowdust, I can empathise.  It is very frustrating, isn't it?  Very well put.

Hugs

- Owl

Rainbowdust
Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2006-05-31 12:52 PM


Thanks Will and Owl.. 'tis very frustrating indeed!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia
4 posted 2006-08-16 01:11 AM


I can no longer be apathetic concerning your absence.
(((Rainbowdust)))
I miss you and your words.   :: bows ::

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