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XOx Uriah xOX
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0 posted 2006-05-30 07:42 PM


"Life", so wonderful
  Imagined duality
  Waxing and waning
Having the experience
  Of an "experiencer"

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skyshine
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1 posted 2006-05-31 12:17 PM


I liked this....made me think too, which is hard to do (at least I think so) in a short format.

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I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
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Liz Sinclair
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2 posted 2006-05-31 05:43 PM


I loved it because I'm definitely an experiencer.  I've never tried one of these types of poems.  Interesting...thanks for sharing.  Take care, Liz...Carpe Diem
Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2006-05-31 05:54 PM


In my father's time

We had one religion

When you have nothing but you have "cobbler's Awls"

No money comes through

Master lives it all

End of storey

Dave

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