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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
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Virginia

0 posted 2006-05-30 02:40 PM


  

   Without rise or fall
   Unaffected, unending
   There is only  Bliss
If there were anything else
  I would feel sorry for it

© Copyright 2006 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
Liz Sinclair
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since 2006-05-06
Posts 93
Atlantis
1 posted 2006-05-31 05:02 PM


Beautiful and true sentiments for humanity.  I love short and to the point.  Thanks for sharing yourself.  Take care, Liz...Carpe Diem
Martie
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2 posted 2006-05-31 05:18 PM


Larry...Bliss is such a lovely word....not felt enough.
Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2006-05-31 05:35 PM



The world I regarded has come undone
Dont know why I etc

On my roof and wall

Simon and Garfunkel DVD is great

I keep listening to it and singing it

Yes

Dave

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4 posted 2006-06-02 10:38 AM


I must agree; beautiful and true sentiments for humanity. You really have away with words!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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