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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2006-05-30 02:16 PM





Enough of this praise for a little hummer
that sometimes comes flitting around
The ooohs and the ahhhs are deafening
when your favorite Red Lored is ALWAYS around~

Sure, the little thing is cutesy
and my mom got a kick out of it
but, it's not like it's staying here
as off to the meadow it will flit~

With me, what you see ... is what you get
Don't flip your feathers over that little flit
I am the talker, the whistler supreme,
I sit the perch in feathered preen~

My name is Vanna
I'm the bird of choice
that won't ever leave the nest
I have not one iota of jealousy
cause my mommy loves me best~


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skyshine
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1 posted 2006-05-30 02:25 PM


Is Vanna a little bit possessive of her mommy? This was cute, I enjoyed reading what must be her thoughts!

~sky

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2 posted 2006-05-30 02:42 PM


Awwww, this is cute.
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3 posted 2006-05-30 02:45 PM


Vanna seems to be a wee bit jealous.  heh heh
Not to worry Vanna.
I love the little hummers too,
but, they will never take the place of my parakeet Casey.
Now you could have a real conversation with him!!
There is not too much he can't say.
But, he doesn't worry about my love of the hummers.
(You've both got one up on them...Casey can talk and so can you!)

Too cute Marge!

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4 posted 2006-05-30 04:08 PM


Vanna is very cute too.  But can Vanna hover???

believe in what your heart feels...

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5 posted 2006-05-30 08:15 PM


Marge/sis...Vanna reminds me so much of one of my birds, Lola.  I'll have to find a photo to send you.  Adorable poem!  
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6 posted 2006-05-30 08:40 PM


Dear Marge:

How could you not love such a beautiful and intelligent bird! And she talks too!

Love
Betty Lou

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7 posted 2006-05-30 10:29 PM


Marge,
Vanna is a beautiful bird with cutesy
words! Enjoyed.
thanks,

picturegramic :)

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8 posted 2006-05-30 10:47 PM


gorgeous bird! lovely write!
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9 posted 2006-05-31 07:21 AM


this was endearing, both the picture and your words...loved this emensly...you've given my mind and heart a great big smile...
beautiful!!!!

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10 posted 2006-05-31 04:02 PM



i was feeling a little down in the dumps today,but you just put a smile on my face..reminds me of my aunty hilda's old bird,teeky..great stuff!

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