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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2006-05-30 12:23 PM



if "The Price is Right"

     take a chance

on a nice balmy night

the need for romance

overrides the plight that we haven't been able to dance

     the salsa yet

but with your hand in mine, it's easy to bet

          on love



                                     howard



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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
1 posted 2006-05-30 01:47 PM


I really like this Howard

It's catchy

Take care.
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Liz Sinclair
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since 2006-05-06
Posts 93
Atlantis
2 posted 2006-05-31 05:33 PM


Your words are soft and romantic...makes one sigh.  Nicely done, thanks for sharing yourself.  Take care, Liz...Carpe Diem
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