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three words.. |
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linkin16 Junior Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 26Wales,UK |
looking to the night sky your voice echoes in my head.. looking for excuses finding three words i should have said.. wading through memories recalling the times gone by.. holding back the tears sucking the past dry.. trying to hide the wounds i bare that only you can nurse.. three words i should have said to you hidden in this verse.. |
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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
Very nice job. Will |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
you're expression here is very powerful just as the other poem I read by you today...your flow is almost effortless. "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
wow...thats really good. It just flows perfectly...its really beautiful ~missy |
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linkin16 Junior Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 26Wales,UK |
hi,thank you for your kind words..and welcomes in my first post..and im really proud you all like what i do..im not really a beginner to all this..i have been a member of other sites before and just kinda fell away..i think my style of writings really strange cus i hear other people saying they work on a piece for months but i write each piece in about 20 minutes and just always leave it how it its..i just wait for the inspiration to come along and the first time my work ever gets put down is when im posting it on a site..maybe it's a kinda freestyle way but its how i enjoy doing it and probably always will..writing how i express myself to myself and how i get things out..its like a quick fix..i'll shut up now,anyways..thanks again  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
short and says so much with so few words nice job |
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perfect stranger Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 54on cloud 9 |
your poem is so sweet she must meen a lot to you,long may your love last. |
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Mick Hawkes Member
since 2000-10-26
Posts 90Tees-side , England |
"writing how i express myself to myself" you can learn so much about your self that way ... i hope you keep it that way :-) Never take life too seriously - None of us gets out alive! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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