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Open Poetry #38

Lost

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2006-05-30 09:15 AM

Laboring a broken heart.
Overwhelmed by the lack of optomism,
saddened by the urge to let go.
Torn between who I am, and who I want to be.

   Unknown Futures,
unforgettable pasts.
      Marching forward,
to other destinations, more productive journies.

Looking deep within,
overwhelmed with fear.
Salty grains of foreclosure,
tingling in these open wounds.

   Uncommon realities,
undeniable love.
     Marching provocatively,
to other beats, the drum silent,

Left behind with tears in these hazel eyes,
oblivious to the hurt they with stand.
Saddened by our letting go,
tainted with forever so.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-05-30 09:45 AM

gosh Kellie
you are really pouring out some tear-jerkers

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2006-05-30 02:00 PM

You encapture life Kelly

But all of your words could be linked to the frustration of someone of any age

Who wants a life, and not what is delivered to them

Excellent

Dave

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

3 posted 2006-05-31 03:38 AM

Sad and heartfelt write.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2006-05-31 07:11 AM

not tainted in the least, but more refined, to life...it is those who suffer the greatest who are given the light of perception, courage, strength....

Hugs and thank you for an amazing write.

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