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Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

0 posted 2006-05-30 01:02 AM

Plain
No makeup
Grief upon her lips
She pushes the shopping cart
Alone
With a single loaf of bread

She feeds herself
Every night
At 7

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-05-30 01:12 AM

sad snapshot
some don't even feed
at any hour

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

2 posted 2006-05-30 01:13 AM

Yes that is true. Thanks again for reading.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-05-30 01:18 AM

Impressive Page. You have said so much in so few words.

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

4 posted 2006-05-30 01:19 AM

Thanks you Lady Kate.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

5 posted 2006-05-30 01:47 PM

Excellent and very sad.

- Owl

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

6 posted 2006-05-31 03:00 PM

Spare Rib under her arm
Spare Rib under her chin

escaping

she finds herself

and the future is another world

Yes I do relate to this

Dave

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

7 posted 2006-05-31 06:16 PM

Thanks...

Liz Sinclair
Member

since 2006-05-06

Posts 93
Atlantis

8 posted 2006-06-01 03:29 PM

There is something special about this piece. It could be anyone of us and all of us. I like that you didn't embellish and make it wordy. The simple design gives it power...Nice job. Take care, Liz...Carpe Diem

When I'm good, I'm very good. But when I'm bad, I'm better.
Those who are easily shocked should be shocked more often.
...the immortal Ma

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

9 posted 2006-06-01 07:07 PM

Going through the motions disconnectedly -- I see this vividly, and think of the poverty grief bestows. ~ K

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

10 posted 2006-06-01 08:59 PM

Thank you Liz and Classy.. your comments move me.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2006-06-02 06:45 PM

Reminds me of the inner grief that many experience...they couldn't find there way out...and many fall by the wayside as a result...James

Ella Blue
Junior Member

since 2006-05-26

Posts 47

12 posted 2006-06-02 11:20 PM

Few words, vivid picture, and we've all seen her, haven't we?:0)

Well done~

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

13 posted 2006-06-03 02:56 AM

Thank you James and Ella... I Appreciate you words

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