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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2006-05-30 12:18 PM

(Here's another one of my earliest ever love poems, over five years old, and one that is still ever so stentimental to me as I continue having dreams like these ever so often, longing to know what it feels like to love for the first time and feel loved like this too!)

Looking Through Loves Eyes
By: Noah Eaton
1/17/01

Humming the sounds of nature to myself,
as I sit near a flowing stream near a warm lake,
I pray to Thee that my love would soon come to me,
out in a meadow growing with myriads of roses,
and daffodils that dance in the jasmine rain,
swooning in the alpine winds,
healing all with Mother Natures rosemary breath.

I massage my chilly small hands,
covering them and tucking them in my lap,
trying to imagine what it would be like
holding my loves hand in this world,
how the simplest touch can bring a spark to my heart,
feeling the warmth of her hand,
omagining what it must be like to love,
and feel everything when I hold her

The winds start to pick up,
but they also feel softer,
like a velvet glove
caressing me and the valley,
s comforting vanilla mist breezes in,
shredded coconut snowflakes
that fondle me to the touch,
I close my eyes and breathe the sweet air,
smelling jasmine, vanilla,
berries everywhere,
the winds caressing at my face,
and down my back.

The winds calm down,
I open my eyes,
as I see the sugary mists diminish,
when a sudden euphoric smile
leaps up upon my face,
as I see a beautiful girl stand there before me,
with long shimmering cinnamon hair
flowing down her back to her waist,
and gorgeous jewel eyes,
opalescing with sparkling light,
filling my heart with joy and wonder.

Wearing a pearl-colored dress,
polished with starry diamonds
and sapphires as blue as the Mongolian sky,
with a breathtaking pair of lunar moth wings,
soft of pure silk and gossamer,
woven with crystals,
she smiles with complete happiness,
her fingers clenched together as she laughs joyfully,
she licks her lip in cheer,
as she walks up to me with beauty,
letting the wind move her.

She lands close to me,
she touches my face slowly
with her soft gentle hand,
I can’t stop smiling,
she is so beautiful,
and I continue to look into her crystal eyes,
as I see this spark ignite in them,
a warm soft laser of affection casted,
melting my heart,
breathless in my love for her,
I hold her hands,
pulling me closer to her
and she holds me in her arms.

We hug each other,
with our heads over each others shoulders,
smiling and crying in joy,
I knew I found her now,
she tells me how she longed for me so,
and she wants to be with me
I tell her I love her,
and she says her love for me through such words of beauty,

"Your eyes shine most bright,
brighter than the brightest star,
your lips sing with the heavens,
like a robin nested
in the apple tree of my heart,
your heart beats within mine,
you melt from the tongue of my desire like honey,
the voice of you, the robin,
sings in me,
and I want you to share loves song with me”

I feel my legs and mind melt,
as I hear her heavenly words echo upon the gulch,
we slowly raise and pull our heads back
to face each other,
holding each others hands,
again, I look into her silky teary eyes,
dancing with azure sky rays
polka-dotted with snowflakes,
I close my eyes
with her beautiful image in mind
as I lean in to kiss her,
holding her in my arms.

Looking through loves eyes,
I see everything,
I feel just inches away from heaven,
fter one soft kiss,
she tells me that she swears
she saw the heavens with me for one brief moment,
she puts her arms around me now and kisses me,
her wings flutter softly,
and all the butterflies begin to swoon
with the windchime music of the wind,
all the butterflies gather together
and float around us as we kiss,
the colors of the wind drip about,
as the butterflies sing their metamorphosis opus,
sounds of new true love found

I continue to kiss her,
as she hops up on the balls of her feet,
I hold her around the waist
as she holds the back of my neck,
I hold her now,
as she hangs on to me,
kissing me,
sighing with joy,
as I breathe with her in euphony,
the butterflies flutter on,
bleeding loves color throughout the mountains,
when I begin to float with her up into the sky

We float high above the warm lake,
my lips locked with hers,
our bodies attached together,
with me touching her soft tender skin,
her touching my face and neck and chest,
the butterflies finally stop spinning,
as drops of loves paint from their wings
of art come raining upon the vale,
as I begin to fall down with her,
holding her close to my heart,
and we plunge into the hot spring lake.

We hold each other underwater,
kissing as I look around,
to see golden starfish twinkle,
and rainbow trout reflect with rainbow lights
as they swim around us,
I float up to the surface of the water with her, making love together,
up from the glistening gorgeous lake,
our heads pop up from below the surface,
as we continue to kiss each other,
as the rainbow paints tap the water
like pieces of hail,
all the colors spreading upon the water,
geysers sprouting out from beneath the water,
as colorful steam fills the air.

I open my eyes and our lips pull back
as I look at her beautiful lunar wings
change into colorful rainbow wings,
with a beautiful piece of me
painted deep in the heart of her art,
I look into her heavenly eyes again,
as we smile together,
both knowing,
that we are looking through loves eyes,
and we forever will together,
as I begin to kiss her again...

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

Will Rhyme
Member

since 2006-05-22

Posts 149

1 posted 2006-05-30 12:30 PM

Somewhat intresting my friend, but, way, way, way, way too long.

Might you say more with less...a lot less????

Just my opinion.

Thanks,

Will

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2006-05-30 08:40 AM

How softly romantic Noah!
You are going to make your dream gal very very lucky.
Hugs from your sidekick, Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2006-05-31 02:59 PM

Noah, I lose myself in your dreamy, fantazzmagorical love poems. One who has so much love to give is certainly deserving of having his dream girl arrive during waking hours!

Linda

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2006-05-31 08:31 PM

nice read

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2006-06-01 12:53 PM

What a wonderful romantic you are Noah Angel! I could visualize the wonderfully lovely and loving picture of your first encounter with your dream girl. What a vision! *hugs to you*......jo

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2006-06-07 10:19 AM

when you find that true love, I hope she sweeps you off your feet....this is beautiful Noah....

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

7 posted 2006-06-24 12:14 PM

Hi Sweetie Pie,

So nice to stop in here for a quick read.  Very lovely...you romantic thing you.  Beautiful, deep, heartfelt, and passionate.  So Noah!!!!  Thank You for sharing.
Take Care!!!!
LOVE,
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink

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