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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-05-29 06:15 PM


Machine is normal noisey

Loud blowing and sucking dust

Machines talk to each other

We send our wife's to sleep

Often in different rooms

We or that was the We

When oft we spoke in words that spoke, that transcended words

Waffle

We worked with our backs

After work

Of course

We would not be so corse

To be

Course

Else

We were

Hunted

As a drunk

Who failed to

Deliver

And

Still

Trying

To

Write

His

Tombe

Dave

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-05-29 06:32 PM


lol, ok, since you asked
what I said

make me mad?
I'll turn you off
maybe even unplug you

end of static

Martie
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2 posted 2006-05-29 06:38 PM


I like Kacy's reply....we depend too much on contraptions!
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3 posted 2006-05-30 10:38 PM


I have been one.....most times I say "WHOOSH SWOOSH R-R-R-R-R-R-R-R-R-R-R-R-R!!!!" but what I really like are the times when I get to say "Bzzz-z-z-z-z-z-z-z-z-z-z-z-z-z-z-z-z-z-m-m-m-m-m-m-m-m-mmmm........."


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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
4 posted 2006-05-31 02:23 PM


Midnitesun
lol, ok, since you asked
what I said

make me mad?
I'll turn you off
maybe even unplug you

end of static  

Fine by me, Midnight

I've forgotten which of your states says 'show me'

Dave

Martie
  
I like Kacy's reply....we depend too much on contraptions!  

Which are human and which are machines, I suppose it depends on who is earning

Dave

Ratleader

Same comment I think

dave



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