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Bodger
Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-05-29 04:21 PM


He keeps screwing up our break-up

I dont want him relaxing taking time
He can't relax
Everything I done to him is fine

Gottem to react
Gottem to drink
Got the spurs in
Make me

dance Jake

He keeps screwing up
Picking roses from the air
Early peas
I looked, they weren't there

Got a Millionaire
Had him before
Do my yearly trip
And the bill always elsewhere

Problem is he screws up
Makes me really think
But I've live off him for all these years

And now

I need to live off someone else

I think

Dave

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2006-05-29 04:27 PM


time
yes
let it move you now

Bodger
Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2006-05-29 04:29 PM


to where ink

Dave

Will Rhyme
Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149

3 posted 2006-05-29 04:39 PM


Love this line of yours:

"Early peas
I looked, they weren't there"

and, Thanks for commenting on my poem "In Season", but, No, it wasn't about studants at all.

Thanks again.

Will

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