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linkin16
Junior Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 26
Wales,UK

0 posted 2006-05-29 03:30 PM

yesterday i fell for you
last night you took my heart..
your eyes took me prisoner
but i was falling from the start..

i tried to keep things simple
but your smile just took me in..
now here alone im dying tonight
while you lay there with him..

the first time our bodies touched
and the moment our lips met..
i knew i would never forgive myself
but its to him i am in debt..

just cant help the way i feel
and i know you feel me too..
but that night we broke three hearts
and all thats left is two..

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2006-05-29 04:32 PM

Please, check your email for a special greeting...WELCOME hope you enjoy your time here...
Greeneyes~

this is a great first post....

.....

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding

Will Rhyme
Member

since 2006-05-22

Posts 149

2 posted 2006-05-29 04:40 PM

enjoyed much!

Will

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

3 posted 2006-05-29 06:55 PM

Hi, I enjoyed reading your poem, too, and hope to see more soon. Welcome to the site.

~ Klassy

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-05-29 07:18 PM

welcome to Passions

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2006-05-30 01:31 AM

Welcome. I enjoyed your write.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2006-05-30 01:14 PM

Linkin~
A across the pond ...
WELCOME to PiP !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

linkin16
Junior Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 26
Wales,UK

7 posted 2006-05-30 06:09 PM

thankyou for the warm welcomes..im quite shocked..hope you enjoy my writing just as much as i enjoy writing it..look forward to seeing all your diffrent styles and maybe learning from them..thanks again

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