Emptiness-eternity - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #38

Emptiness-eternity

juj1
Junior Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 22
Laval Quebec Ca

0 posted 2006-05-29 04:34 AM

A river of emotions slowly travels in my soul
Tender flows implying an unanimated mind,
Yet it seems something that now looks whole
Reveals a lost heart uncaring of a lovely find.

Shadows swim around these blackened waters
Spreading within each flap a poisonous demise,
A tranquil passing caressing the broken shatters
Of a lonely heart deprived of its emotional cries.

A damned fountain lies in the center of my body
Pouring countless tears of suffering never heard,
Slowly drowning fragile hopes and dreams in me
An empty vessel forgotten by our own Shepherd.

Cursed emotions overflow borders established
As bursts of emptiness swallow my inner child,
Devouring by its rising what love accomplished
With hurled words forever locked and compiled.

Passing time hidden beneath darkened waters
Calmly stealing the remaining ray of light in me,
Closing eyes reveal writtings of ending chapters
Of a book condemned to this emptiness-eternity.

Fabiani
Member

since 2006-05-12

Posts 123
Mesa, Az

1 posted 2006-05-29 05:32 AM

i love this poem its beatiful i undertand it cause i seems like something i would write or wish i wrote awsome imagry~

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.