»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #38
»
The Dive (external theory)
| Open Poetry #38 |
|
The Dive (external theory) |
|
|
Fabiani Member
since 2006-05-12
Posts 123Mesa, Az 
|
have you ever felt yourself slipping away? I am, I mean, I was slipping away but no matter what I am I'm me, and I know me so I'm ok have you ever felt yourself slipping away? you are, I mean, you were, slipping away but no matter what you are you you, and you know you so your ok It starts out with a question. how much of it is real? Now all is irrelevant, outside of this ordeal Don't worry about explaining it there isn’t any human language that can actually describe exactly how you feel Now I see clear, through external distractions Piece by piece it comes together, so I laugh and I smile In the beginning it was deranged But I guess all things come to pass, after awhile If madness could have a picture face how would it look? like step one to becoming the contents of your own book? Right where you are right now is where your gonna stay And as long as you're always moving with yourself you'll, never slip away Aim-DuWerdestBrachen |
||
| © Copyright 2006 Jose Luis Fabiani Jr. - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
itzy New Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 4USA |
"have you ever felt yourself slipping away? I am, I mean, I was slipping away but no matter what I am I'm me, and I know me so I'm ok have you ever felt yourself slipping away? you are, I mean, you were, slipping away but no matter what you are you you, and you know you so your ok It starts out with a question. how much of it is real? Now all is irrelevant, outside of this ordeal Don't worry about explaining it there isn’t any human language that can actually describe exactly how you feel Now I see clear, through external distractions Piece by piece it comes together, so I laugh and I smile In the beginning it was deranged But I guess all things come to pass, after awhile If madness could have a picture face how would it look? like step one to becoming the contents of your own book? Right where you are right now is where your gonna stay And as long as you're always moving with yourself you'll, never slip away" yup yup i've felt myself slipping away and it's true how in the end u can see how everything tied up in the beginning so u can smile because u know things pass after a while. true that.  good poetry! |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
