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The Dive(internal theory)
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The Dive(internal theory) |
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Fabiani Member
since 2006-05-12
Posts 123Mesa, Az 
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this is one of the shortest poems that took the longest to write *It's my favorite* it's very speacial to me The Dive It starts out with a question How much of it is real? Rabbits become vultures Cultures become Veal a party becomes a funeral Sunlight turns into cancer the rain turns beautiful An unusual question becomes an answer You found yourself falling into madness So you dove The best thing you ever did was let go So here you are, and now you understand You always were here That’s why you always ran but you can only run away for so long before you catch up with yourself And become part of the fog I'd like to welcome you, To the heaven you've created I tell the truth, This is the wisdom of the ancients Holding onto something contradicts my being, So fly free Maybe I had to go crazy to get where I am I felt myself slipping away and I let myself fall Gotta lose your mind before you find it And when you finally find it you'll find out you never lost it at all Aim-DuWerdestBrachen MSN- Tooshaysalesmen@hotmail.com Yup YuP~ [This message has been edited by Fabiani (05-29-2006 02:56 AM).] |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
This poem takes a circuitous route and arrives at the beginning again -- in that sense, it is has cohesion, but did the question get answered? How much of it is real? Or has the trip made the question irrelevant? Thanks for posting this poem. |
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Fabiani Member
since 2006-05-12
Posts 123Mesa, Az |
im writing More about this side of me it intrigues me. I think ill do a follow up to this one. When something intrests me i can stay up all night writing about it. who knew using your mind could be this much fun? Aim-DuWerdestBrachen |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
::smiles:: Yup Yup :: bows :: |
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