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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2006-05-28 07:26 PM


Java jumps into my brainwaves
shakes me loose from this chair
leaves me dangling in midair
and the cries are so loud,
so very loud
they pain my ears
bring me to tears
knowing
anguish and suffering
wails itself in surround sound
and all I can do
is keep my own feet
on steady ground
and breathe the notes
I am so sorry
I am so sorry

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-05-28 07:32 PM


Kacy,  maybe I am just too old to understand
what you have going on in this poem...Is
is about coffee and running out of it, or
something like that....forgive my stupidity.

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2 posted 2006-05-28 07:34 PM


nooo
'tis about Indonesia

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3 posted 2006-05-28 07:44 PM


The earthquake..yes, now it all makes
perfect sense to me.   thanx!!  My mind
has been off on other tangents lately.  That is
truly a tragedy.  We must count our blessings.

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4 posted 2006-08-27 11:18 PM


This is good! I will save it to my computer! And thank you for all your comments!
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5 posted 2006-08-27 11:40 PM




"and breathe the notes
I am so sorry
I am so sorry"

wonderful work Kacy
thank you



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6 posted 2006-08-28 11:12 AM


Brenda Lee sang "'m sorry, so sorry
Please accept my apology..."

Ineresting write

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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