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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-05-28 07:04 PM



Hell and high water

Spoken

Tidal waves

(((((((((((((((((((

Wish I could have found better

and I do wish that

Dave

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-05-28 07:12 PM


sometimes, brevity screams
and some days, three times
is just not enough


Liz Sinclair
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since 2006-05-06
Posts 93
Atlantis
2 posted 2006-05-28 10:26 PM


The biggest misconception is that you have to say so much to mean anything, which isn't necessarily true.  Sometimes the most ingenious ideas/comments are the ones that are stoical and precise, hence, to the point.  I found this to be witty and playful.  Thanks for sharing.  Take care.  Liz...Carpe Diem
Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2006-05-29 04:36 PM


Liz

If it is

How you write your expressions

I will for one be happy

I may not have a house when the delay rips everything apart

Your thoughts

Unfortunately

Will not feature

Dave

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
4 posted 2006-06-01 01:58 PM


I'd had days like this.
Hope all is well my friend.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

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