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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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silent clouds rush by me lightning speed thoughts surrounded soundings, musical spiralling fantasy waves of notes cascading pouring capriciously water under the bridge over the falls and me...caught in the sounds silently holding on tightly to the barrel as it drops me teeming foaming gurgling upside down within a moment ~cloudy~ are these thoughts stolen from Paynes grey skies and thrown into my open palms ~a rainbow splays itself~ the day is yet young the inkwell is nearly full overflowing...is imminent eminent domain notwithstanding, the waiting line is left of me underneath a sign that reads "cloudy today, with a chance of rain" caught between the thundered soundings ~silence~ |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
The colourful explosion within your mind here is fantastic kacy...enjoyed your words and control of the poems movement..thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Phil, thanks for reading my mental cloudburst. |
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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
"underneath a sign that reads "cloudy today, with a chance of rain" Very good writing indeed~ WIll |
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