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Danielle
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0 posted 2006-05-28 05:47 PM


Am I in love?
Or am I in lust?
Is it really too early to tell?
Or could you really be 'the one'?
I find myself day dreaming of being in your arms...
Fantazing about how good your lips must taste...
Longing to call you my own...
So am I in love?
Or am I in lust?
In my heart I feel it is love...
But my head asks how can I be in love with someone I barely know...
Isn't half the part of falling in love the unknown?
So why m I afraid to say I think I'm falling in love with you?
Could it be becasue you are so far away?
And that I have no way of knowing how you feel?
Scared I'll be rejected...
I'll hold on to the hope that it is love and not lust...
Until you return and I know for sure...
I shall call it love

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1 posted 2006-05-28 05:55 PM


"And that I have no way of knowing how you feel?
Scared I'll be rejected..."

if you don't take the chance you'll never know, I think it's always better to tell them, than to regret not telling them later on...


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2 posted 2006-05-29 10:03 PM


What do you want more?   James
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3 posted 2006-05-30 10:45 PM


Usually when we wonder, what we feel is "notice"....and it can become either...or hopefully, both!

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4 posted 2006-05-31 05:22 PM


everybody has felt like this at sometime in their life,be happy.
perfect stranger
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5 posted 2006-05-31 05:23 PM


everybody has felt like this at sometime in their life,be happy.


Danielle
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6 posted 2006-06-01 04:24 PM


I'd like it to be love
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7 posted 2006-06-01 09:30 PM


Great poem of love and fear give us more.
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