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Back To The Drawing Board |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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Back To The Drawing Board I always return to sadness but it has a different feel home is never the same once you've gone through the ordeal of venturing beyond the fence to find the greener grass, upon realizing it doesn't exist... wouldn't you know...you're out of gas somewhere out there in happiness I sought to blaze a trail yes, I left my mark behind me where, fatigued, I dragged my tail now I'm back at point A the infamous drawing board broke, having spent more love than I could afford I know sometimes I'll wonder about you, what you became, it's a different feel of sadness but sadness all the same. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I know sometimes I'll wonder about you, what you became, it's a different feel of sadness but sadness all the same" it sure is  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I really enjoyed this one Dixie M |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dixie "now I'm back at point A the infamous drawing board broke, having spent more love than I could afford" Funny thing about love....it grows back! |
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BROTHER JOHN Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 386 |
Dear Passingshadows, Life is a drawing board. We all have redrawn many times. Conclusions are simply the seeds of new beginnings. Something tells me you could take this thought and go with it. Remember, it is the wounded who are the healers. BJ |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
So you are back to ''the drawing board'' are you?..So draw an even better scene?..With fervant love and days of beauty blessed...Enjoyed this poem...time now for the happy you...to splash these pages in riotous colours..go create...we will watch out for you...thank you for the words... Goldenrose. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
lol, the texture on that damned drawing board changes, so keep a varied set of pens and brushes handy  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You have that touch...I can only hope that reality is better than this...If not, here, have a hug! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I always return to sadness but it has a different feel home is never the same once you've gone through the ordeal of venturing beyond the fence to find the greener grass, upon realizing it doesn't exist... I know sometimes I'll wonder about you, what you became, it's a different feel of sadness but sadness all the same." __________________________________ Yes life and love are like drawing boards.....I feel your words and relate very much - reading this poem was almost like reading exactly how I've felt for a while now.....love lost & letting go is not easy, but you expressed it VERY well  Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
Oh, this is very good Shadows. Great Job! Will |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
classic dixie as always most elegant |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Remember to wipe the slate clean. (((Dixie))) |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Very good. You Are Loved |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I know sometimes I'll wonder about you, what you became, it's a different feel of sadness but sadness all the same. I am here too Dixie Hugs Hope |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Sadness has so many different feels and levels to it....and yet sometimes it doesn't matter, because it's all still sadness. You are so right, Dixie.  ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
somehow I get the feeling this road is here for all of us, and I understand that drawing board as well, only perhaps not in the same way. a poet who cares |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you all so much! I'm smiling at the replies you have left for me...they are always appreciated greatly |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...its hard to let go...change is hard...James |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Miss Dixie strikes again!!! I enjoyed this one...you hit that spot! You do it everytime. THANX |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You always write with such honesty. Keep smilin' Dixiedoodlegirl !! hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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