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nate92488
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0 posted 2006-05-28 04:31 PM


She is that of perfection,
Enticing the mind and eye
Causing a state of deep affection
That almost makes me cry
For I fear of that terrible day
When my eyes no longer view
Those lovely locks of a crimson hue
And my soul is in dismay.
For I am cursed with my timidity
With no way to overcome
This constant state of morbidity
To which I must not succumb.
Yet I remember that someday I'll find amenity
Rectify this despondency,
And find my true identity.
Put an end to this deficiency
And no longer will I remain bleak,
But instead ascend to the highest peak.

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1 posted 2006-05-28 05:23 PM


nate92488
Again enjoyed the read.

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Gaia
2 posted 2006-05-28 05:43 PM


nice imagery
enjoyed

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3 posted 2006-05-28 08:55 PM


"She is that of perfection,
Enticing the mind and eye
Causing a state of deep affection
That almost makes me cry"


how sweet!

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