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poettothecars
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0 posted 2006-05-28 01:36 AM




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Ode to a Canadian Heart

11 August 2005


Ode to a Canadian heart
were blue skies do shine
This in verse of a poet
captured like a
photograph to time

Away in a manger
and no crib for a bed
Those words painted to visa
when all done in colour read

This smile in rock-wood to paper maid
an Eden to gather in flowers to rose
An Ontarian paradise to Toronto await
far from London in essence flows

With summer basket of gift to fruit
from Lake Erie to Georgian Bay
Why it was she in spirit was this muse
was as to drying grass - pasture to hay


"And she brought forth her firstborn son, and wrapped him in swaddling
clothes, and laid him in a manger; because there was no room for them
in the inn. And the angel said unto them, Fear not: for, behold, I bring
you good tidings of great joy, which shall be to all people. Glory to
God in the highest, and on earth peace, good will toward men."
Luke 2: 7, 10, 14 KJV


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[This message has been edited by poettothecars (05-28-2006 02:56 AM).]

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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
1 posted 2006-05-28 09:02 AM



Check out that Canadian flag! ....A unique twist on being Canadian in relation to the holy birth...
Thank you

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

poettothecars
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2 posted 2006-05-28 04:05 PM


The irony is Eden is a place in Ontario, Canada - and what is missing from the poem is the name of the place in Canada, the poem is describing. Because I have trouble pronouncing the word.

In truth the poem relates to Guelph, Ontario, Canada found near by places like Rockwood and Eden

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