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S Arthur Grey
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woven by a poet's loom

0 posted 2006-05-28 12:52 PM



    Possible Colors

     I write of you in blue
      and all the many colors of my pens.
        One color per day
         and one more just for certain words between us.
           I think like a rainbow about what could have been
            and where it might have ended

              so vivid after that passing storm.
                 All storms pass
                  and leave a path behind, they say,
                    but the rainbow is a fleeting thing
                     and must be shared from a common point of view
        
                        ~and you are now so very far away~
  
  


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Ella Blue
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since 2006-05-26
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1 posted 2006-05-28 02:13 AM


Oh I like this!
All the colors of our human emotions, how quickly they change, and yet, are each one, a defining part of our make up, creating a full spectrum.
Nice


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2006-05-28 06:54 AM


Ella said it best
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2006-05-28 08:10 AM


you sir
are a rainbow

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