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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Still.... still.... I’m afraid I always will.... look into these eyes and you will see someone looking for something that used to be a woman haunted by his memory sentimental sadness in brown eyes brimming with tears refusing to flow a heart still holding on still unwilling to let him go a furtive fluttering of moist eye lashes attempt to blink this love away still..... oh still.... I’m afraid I never will.... ~SEA~ [This message has been edited by SEA (05-29-2006 12:06 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a beautiful bittersweet write Susan. And, as always the perfect pic! hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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greysolace Member
since 2006-03-27
Posts 71 |
i love how i can relate to this. awesome write. basic enough to convey the feeling, but complex enough to express the desperation of the woman. ~~Poetry is written emotion~~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've captured her thoughts, her style, her losses... her needs... well done, little one! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I relate to this more than I could ever express.....I feel your words and I know this worry, this longing....beautiful and bitter to read accompanied by a perfect picture. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
To live in hope, or hope to live either way, a poem to read several times if only to discover what was hidden inside a poet who cares |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful write that I can certainly understand deep down inside |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful and poignant write that allows the reader to feel what she feels. Well done, sweetie. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Your words always reach one of those emotional memories that reside deep within a corner of my heart~   Happy Memorial Day weekend, sweets~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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lost4dm New Member
since 2006-05-28
Posts 6Louisiana, USA |
Makes me long for my own true love. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
A truly wonderful write, Sea! And, no, we cannot blink love away. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Memories are like ghosts that pop up every once in a while just to remind us that they're still there. Very poignant write, SEA. ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maybe it's a good thing that love refuses to leave...yes, I think it is. Poignant write! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done Susan, that could always be a tough decision to carry out... Love is such a strange emotion/feeling. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A fine write ....enjoyed..thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome write Susan !! hugs, Chris  Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Hey lady! I am totally feeling this today...Your writing hasn't changed...still as beautiful as ever. Good to see you! Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Still writing gorgeous poetry then SEA! How do you always manage to put it so beautifully? "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I find the pain makes me let go and move on...only when you let go can you see the beauty of someone new...otherwise you are comparing them to the one you are holding on to...and how can they measure up to that...James |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
wonderful. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
SEA, have to agree that this aches bittersweet. That pic......wow.....says it all. *hugs*....jo |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all for taking the time to read and leave your kind words. there are certain people that touch our lives...the footprints they leave on our beaches, never wash away... ‘I want to swim away |
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Tom Zart Senior Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 682 |
Such a beautiful,wounderful write Susan I love your work please give us more. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Sea They are some of the most beautiful words I have read Dave |
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