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New Beginning (rewrite)
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New Beginning (rewrite) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
It is start now When we shall become one We will know The time about being together It is tomorrow to get to know about love It is a new begining we are going through Whenever we call eachother And make wishes under the stars It is start now When we soon will come And know the day We are going through It is only love we are having right now Love is aheading towards us It is diffcult to sperate us untill it is time to go Noone will know What we have been through It is all in game and fair It is start now When we shall become one We will know It is time about being together |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
When we are able to begin anew, with the freshness and love of forever then we are safe. Good write, dear Vandana. Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"It is a new begining we are going through Whenever we call eachother And make wishes under the stars" Very lovely words and thoughts. Happiness to you, Vandna. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Vandana, your poetry is growing. Your composition is improving a lot. Keep going, you are doing just fine. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I especially enjoyed the hope in this write. TD |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Vandana I agree with Barry, your work is growing. A beautiful heart write sweetie. |
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