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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2006-05-27 11:02 AM

True love comes knocking on the wooden door
and stands beside the fire of burning coal.
In wait the moment when two loves explore
as lightning flashes brightly thunder rolls.

A kiss perhaps shall calm the waiting fears
which bring to clutch the racing aching heart.
And each shall bring a hand to wipe one’s tears
before the pouring rain tears love apart.

For if the calm were lost before the storm
no mind would find a moment to conspire.
Then both would leave behind a waiting arm
as cherubs played a tune upon their lyre.

To wait the storm is torment to one’s soul
and keeps two hearts in search of but one goal.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2006-05-27 11:09 AM

loved this

"To wait the storm is torment to one’s soul
and keeps two hearts in search of but one goal."

that is for sure

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2006-05-27 11:15 AM

This is beautiful - I love every line, especially the last 2 lines.

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2006-05-27 11:34 AM

Barry,
Enjoyed the read, but then I always do when I read you.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2006-05-27 12:28 PM

good read

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

5 posted 2006-05-27 02:01 PM

such await holds the clue ...
when love is but two true.

Life's storms hold many incredible delights!

good to read you again

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2006-05-27 02:16 PM

Barry....so good...last lines really tied it up nicely. You did good and getting better all the time!!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2006-05-27 03:05 PM

quote:
A kiss perhaps shall calm the waiting fears
which bring to clutch the racing aching heart.

Love the title too!

Just beautiful, dear Barry.

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2006-05-27 05:37 PM

what a write! A very good-looking style on you!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2006-05-27 11:39 PM

"To wait the storm is torment to one’s soul
and keeps two hearts in search of but one goal."

Oh my...one of your best Barry!
Hugs~Nancy

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2006-05-28 04:00 PM

lovin this too....nicely done Barry

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2006-05-28 05:18 PM

A Lovely read Barry, but I know each I time I read you that I am in for a treat!

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