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Aftertaste |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Postings left layered stayed a day or two curled at corners crumpled. Bitter chocolate thought as sweet taste buds detect natural cocoa less the sweet A posting a calling for shop windows accept tape then as calendar days strip the ad of its lustre an aftertaste peeks through Each ad upon the next who calls first or comes last calendar paper days crumble turn to ash on grander scales ripped by gales for an incomplete purpose Chocolate stains on window panes left over tidbits near crumpled news of ads posted calling for: a musician a soundman a daycare community news unemployed blues viewed but untasted taped in layers tearoffs peeled urgently as calendar days go the way of bitter chocolate tasted for missing sweetness tried for experience. bitter chocolate thought as sweet tried for value aftertaste to keep [This message has been edited by ecrivan (05-26-2006 11:20 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is the little things that take day into evening twilight... Always enjoy the sound, and taste...  of your poems, Martin! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Someone called it poetic impressionism, not that it matters..a coincidental title for me  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love it...and for some reason I don't like the dark chocolate..too bitter for me M |
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