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Evanescence
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Evanescence |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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EVANESCENCE December 1998 The light sparkled on the glass in your hand. For a moment, I turned away, and, like the light, you were gone, but for an instant, you and the sparkle were there, …I think. - Owl |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow what a mood this brings! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Diana...makes me think of time...how transitory....you put flavor in this so easily with just a few words. Me likes!  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh YES Dianna I know the feel of your words, this expresses it perfectly. I'm keepin this one hon!  seek the flame within yourself |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you passing shadows, Martie and Gentle Spirit for your lovely responses. I am glad you enjoyed the moment. - Owl |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"but for an instant, you and the sparkle were there, …I think" What a beautiful mood Diana. A fragile, fading away... |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you Kate, although I can't yet see your response, except on Print and the email notification. Glad you liked it. - Owl |
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